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Sorry, it's been years and I had been occupied with long serious of being unemployed, working crappy end jobs, but finally I have something that'll keep me financially stable without me wanting to shoot myself.
Big change. I'm currently working on three novels. Clover, Noel, and Lynn, yes all three have titular female leads. I know its a big undertaking to write three novels at the same time, but I've been enjoying it so far. What I post won't be the finished product, but will undergo changes and revisions as time goes by, but in the mean time, whatever feedback I can get will be most helpful.
Big change. I'm currently working on three novels. Clover, Noel, and Lynn, yes all three have titular female leads. I know its a big undertaking to write three novels at the same time, but I've been enjoying it so far. What I post won't be the finished product, but will undergo changes and revisions as time goes by, but in the mean time, whatever feedback I can get will be most helpful.
Title Change part 2
Okay, I now have a new ( now permanent ) title for my Mass Effect fanfiction.
"Green Pastures, Quiet Waters"
It's from the Bible Psalm 23. Here is a link to the full verse. http://encouragingbiblequotes.com/versescomforta.html
Also finished reading Last Stand of the Wreckers. Man, I never thought that they would release a Transformers comic so dark and twisted. If you are tender heart or sensitive about depictions of torture and brutal deaths, then stay away from this comic.
Overall, good story with touching characters.
Title Changing
I don't know why, but the title "Lullaby for the Lost" doesn't sit well for me. I was playing with "fight for the lost" tag line. It was a good idea at the time, as is a lot of ideas.
I wanted to use a title that is part of a prayer, like "Deliver us from Evil" or something else. I'm still puzzling over it. Maybe something to do with sleeping, since the main characters have been in a deep sleep for a century.
Century Sleep?
The Big Sleep? No, that's death.
Anyway, if someone has an idea, please send it to me.
Posting Lost Chapters
Lullaby for the Lost (title will change soon) has undergone chapters rewritten, so I thought it might be a good idea to post the chapters that have undergone changes or have been taken out of the story completely. I'll begin posting these chapters tomorrow, please leave Feedback.
I need Feedback
Seriously, I need feedback. I wonder why there is so much feedback for District 9: Stained, something that I think of as ill-conceived and badly written, but my Mass Effect fiction is ignored and that is something I've taken more time and put more thought into.
I need some feedback about my work. Please, be critical about it. Tell me what you dislike or like about it.
I know I use a lot of OCs, and I will admit to that, but I hate Mary Sues and I try to steer clear of writing one, by making my OCs as normal as possible and give them personality flaws. I even put them through several Mary Sue tests to be sure that they are acceptable.
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